Tab 4, "Trick or Treat"
Uh, okay. Gave you a quick skim, was a little befuddled.
How many long-abandoned houses get trick-or-treat visitors? How many abandoned houses are there in neighborhoods that are affluent enough to engage in trick-or-treating?
The interview was kind of typical spooky "person yells about something they've lost" dialogue… and I was almost unsure of if I was supposed to be laughing or not.
I dunno. I feel like this could be a pretty interesting tale, but as it currently is, it feels a little bland.