AS summary really TBH. There ARE some things (after the XXXX re-read) I am not happy with. Been a bit liberal with the black boxes methinks and some details need some clarifying/tidying up.
In short, around 60% I am happy with, but feel there's details missing (EG how does the figure produce the effect it does, what limits there are on it's effects and the mystery of how it's container got opened)
Anyhow - here's the link… thoughts, insights and loathes are equally expected and welcome.