Not much to say here. I think this may be my best attempt yet though, so I'd love some help and critique.
You made a really good effort in attempting to describe "bad luck charms" in a clinical tone. I think the effects are rather overdone (a K-class event is considered to be world-ending or world-altering!), and could stand to be toned down a bit. You should also go ahead and check out the clinical tone guides we have on-site, to fix up your tone in this article.
The addenda don't add much to the draft. They turn it from "weird bad luck charms" to "weird bad luck prisons that will kill you dead," which made me much less interested in the article itself. Also, where'd you get those pictures from? You have to make sure that those pictures are free to use, or they will be taken down.