After finally managing to get this concept to a draft state I'm comfortable with, I'm looking to get some feedback on whether or not it is captivating.
http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/nemonemo (Tab 1, "Farmhouse Heads")
My specific concerns are whether my descriptions are satisfactory and clear enough, and whether or not the article is too lengthy or wordy. I do have a story behind what the beings exactly are, but I felt trying to jam more information between the lines would just make the article seem bloated. Also, if there is anything wrong with the logic or grammar of this article, please let me know.