Here is a mostly completed SCP I have written. I am looking for feedback on whether or not this is a solid idea for an SCP and worth expanding upon. Even if it isn't, I will still probably complete it just for practice, so feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated. Be completely honest and straight forward, if something sucks or if the whole thing sucks, I want to know. Thank you for your time.
"I'm late, I'm late, I'm late," said the White Rabbit.
Sorry, that was the first thing I thought of when I saw the title.
All your blackboxes have spaces in between them. You should delete those spaces, they're not needed and they make reading the article more confusing at times.. Also, there's a specific naming standard for MTFs, such as MTF Kappa-1 ("Herping It"). I made that one up, I think, but you get the idea. MTF Greek Letter-Number ("Nickname").
Your sentence structure can be very odd at times, and you really miss scientific tone in some places. Clinical Tone Declassified is a good source for tightening up your tone. Additionally, that interview doesn't read like two people having an interview.