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http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/capnthatguy, first tab.

Honestly, I don't even know if the joke is that funny, but I woke up with it in my head yesterday and had to get it out. Any critique is appreciated, especially for places to tighten up the gag, assuming it actually is funny.

Also, I'm considering slipping in a youtube link to the song, but I don't know if the would break the flow and/or ruin the joke.

I definitely found this amusing through to the end of the Containment Procedures. The first two footnotes, in particular, were very much to my taste.

However by the time you got to the second paragraph of the Description, you've left yourself without anything new to bring to the joke. That rapidly drained the humour out of it, especially without much of a punchline to fall back on.

I think you could make something out of the "Streetlight! People!" exclamations, especially if the streetlight people were hiding somewhere in the night. Perhaps the Description is where you leave the direct citation of the lyrics behind and go into an in-depth review of the nocturnal behaviour of the streetlight people, including -1 and -2 as instances thereof. Still needs a punchline, though.