http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/bryx First tab. Not the collapsibles. I tried posting this as an SCP more than a year ago. The general consensus was that the content was fine, but needed to be reorganized and cut down a bit. Any advice?
The general consensus was that the content was fine, but needed to be reorganized and cut down a bit. Any advice?
Hmm. My eye gaze on looking at this initially was "wow, those are some huuuuuge paragraphs in the description start". Consider maybe starting the description with a single (or maybe two) sentence describing the relationship between SCP-XXXX and the sub-designations, and then having a bullet list with a bullet for each sub-designation and a brief explanation? That way the reader has a more straightforward reference spot to return to when you start putting more of the paragraph details in their path.