It's been a while since I've tried to write an article, and I'd like some general feedback on my newest piece. It's rather short, but I think it's long enough to accomplish its goal.
E: Clarification, tab 1. Oops.
The main parts I'd like some feedback on is the addition of the collapsible at the end, whether it is effective or not. Another part I would also want critique is the idea itself. Too boring? Or too cliche?