Fun. And also rhyming is hard.
Upvoted, because why not.
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Dammit, this is really good.
And I'm slightly sad you based it off the original poem and not the Disney version (which I spent some time memorizing earlier this year because reasons), because that's got such a different structure, and I don't think the voice would fit quite the same.
The Demiurge who made the world
It took me an embarrassingly long time to figure out this didn't mean I was supposed to read it in tune to David Bowie's Man Who Sold The World.