So after a long period of being too busy to write, I finally decided to sit down and work on the second draft of my first SCP. This time, I replaced the final punchline (critics said it fell flat) with a experiment log. I was hoping critics could help me narrow down which fruits are funny enough to deserve a stay and which should be pruned (pun intended). My idea was to start with a weird, but fairly straightforward SCP, that is slowly turning into a headache for those caring for it.
Draft is here