The title of the SCP is still a WIP.
Please feel free to leave some criticism and guidance; I'd like to know whether I'm heading in the right direction.
Cheers enjoying reading!
P.S. If the idea has been overdone; please call me out. I don't want to put my time into a SCP only for it to be shot down for being unoriginal upon posting, thanks again :)
Note: Added Special Containment Procedures
Note: Added Incident Report and revised document
I had just read the Special Containment Procedures and already I thought this was a cool SCP. I noticed a few things that I would like to point out. First off, a few grammatical errors.
Please collapse long posts. ~Zyn
This is a very interesting SCP, and I would love to see what you do with this article. Good luck!
Thank you! Finally I get criticism. I've correct the grammar mistakes and such; that really helped as I had been struggling to word the document for the some reason so that's really helped with flow. The reason for MTF-Gamma-17 not being able to establish connect is due to the randomised universe from which the phenomenon transports matter; I'll establish that more. Also the Electrical Kill-Switch Beta-7 is simply used to raise the watts going into the bulb to damage it beyond use. Basically
it bursts the bulb. Would a user manual suffice? Could I possible tab that? Or would a separate document be better?
Anyway thanks for criticism and I'm glad you liked the SCP c: