So I was made aware it might be a bit too similar to SCP-524, so I tried to add a whole subplot tangentially related to the manna charitable foundation. So I want to ask you, am I forcing it too much? Should I just make it its own weird object? I'm still not entirely sure which order to put the addendums in, and I feel some stuff could be taken out.
Here it is
The new draft is in the alt tab and goes with the exploration log, but I want to know which one you prefer.
Anyways, thanks for listening