Hello, is this the Draft and Critique section? I'd like to report an new SCP draft in my sandbox. It's in the second tab, titled "An Incident". Reckon you'd better get over there and read it.
But seriously, thank you for any critics and comments. Started of as a simple phone getting crazy calls from a mysterious caller about weird stuff, and it turned into a long story about people who just wanted to be left alone, which I'm somewhat proud of. I'm still a bit iffy about some of the wording: English isn't my first language, so sometimes I feel like I wording things wrong. Maybe I should cut some of the time loop stuff to get to the rest faster.
Anyways, hope you enjoyed.