SCP Foundation

Thanks for the crit.
For Day 10-15, what happens during the play is of a rather sexual nature. Guess I was a little too subtle about it. But you are right about there having no anomalousness in this report. I'll fix that.

As for the final letter, I debated longly about putting it in or not. I guess I don't really like to keep my audience hanging, plus I kinda wanted to let the -2 explain themselves. They don't have mean intentions or nothing like that: they're just a couple of people who don't fit in the world, so they decided to make their own by messing with forces they shouldn't have.

I think I'll remove the letter, and add more to day 10-15, possibly by having -1 relates parts of what he hears them say on stage.

There is no one aboard Rocket Jesus. It's just a statue that got sent into space (via anomalous menas) as an art performance piece. What I meant by creating their own world was that they used a sort of memetic effect mixed with spatial manipulation: basically they isolated 272 Carter Drive from the world and made (almost) everyone forget it's existence. When -1 ran over to give to talk to them, he knocked a few anomalous art piece out of anger, causing the effect to extend to his house, and creating the time loop. As for the POI, he never actually got to 272: Jack forgot to send the counter-meme with the letter. The Foundation also never made the like between NS943 and SCP-XXXX because some researcher filed off -1's reports as rambling from a crazy person.
But yeah, now that I actually took the time to type the explanation, I can see that it's pretty complicated.
For now, I think I'll extend the day 10-15 log to make it sound more ritually and remove the letter (If this gets to the main list, I'll just post it in the comment for those who want to know more).
Maybe I'll add an addendum saying the Foundation used new audio technologies somewhere in the 90s to isolate a speech by -2. Although, I do like the idea of NS943 bearing a message, turning it into an act of defiance aimed at the Foundation and the US government (via NASA)

Actually, about days 10-15, someone pointed out that I had messed up the quote box. The actual log is longer, and involves a washing machine and a clone. It's fixed now. Gotta remember to add a space after the >

As for the multiple ending, that wasn't really want I was going for. I was thinking more or less that after the final day, the area affected by the time loop is more or less cut off from the rest of the world.
However you did give me an idea: what if there was a sort of weird space time shenanigan involving multiple end results. Outside the time loop, events happened all at once, creating a sudden large number of anomalous events and items, but in the time loop, only one end event happens per iteration. The final event could be a huge explosion that scattered stuff all across the state, which has yet to happen to -1 and -2.