This is the draft of my first SCP, please leave whatever criticism you have and let me know if there is something out there that is too similar. I will go ahead and say that this item falls under the category of "Item that is extremely good at its intended purpose".
No full drafts in the forums, please. Make a sandbox page, put your draft there, and link it from the thread.
Also, I moved your thread description to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn