Don't get me wrong, this looks cool, but you forgot the rating model and I see some SCP-XXXX's here and there.
Date: 25 Nov 2016 01:03
Number of posts: 40
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Heres a generic list (not complete in any means)
1. No rating module
2. Needs to be edited, a lot of gramma, punctuation and spelling errors.
3. SCP-XXXX crops up in a few places.
Idea is cool but thats about it, the rest of the article needs work.
EDIT: Holy you have a lot of content, but its presented in a way that doesn't make me want to read it all. I'm sure you can salvage some gems from this
EDIT 2: After another rereading i regress, this idea is really cool and dramatic. I'll sit a bit more before deciding absolutely so no vote for now but you can count on my +1 if it receives more polish :)
EDIT: Forgot to credit the image author.
Wow, you guys are quick. I haven't even announced this yet. XD
A few of the XXXX's escaped my attention during the initial posting. I hope to have corrected them by this point.
Yeah, about the rating module: how do I put it there? I thought it was automatically assigned to each tale and article.
Been rereading this several times, trying to fix spelling and grammatical errors, so might have turned blind to them. If you notice any that I've missed, feel free to correct them if you have the time. It'd be much appreciated.
Incredible effort. Some parts of this story scared me shitless. Anyway, the special containment procedures section doesn't require an extra line after it, backspace it a bit until it looks like this:
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-2815 is to be monitored on a 24-hour basis
Overall, good job.
I would like to extend a heartfelt thanks to all the people who've helped me craft this article through their feedback and ideas. There has been a ton of things that I've had to change, but it did make it a better article in the end.
So I would like to thank:
Please don't upload massive images (in your case approx. 7 MB) to your article. The image component will only display them at 300 px wide, but the bandwidth use for mobile viewers is still that 7 MB. I've downsized (and reduced the dpi to 72) and reuploaded them for you, but please make sure your images are suitable for use on the web before you post.
This is now one of my favourite Karcist skips, nice work!
The come-down might what's causing those odd sensations.
Small typo here. Also, the last part of the exploration log, which should be italicized, isn't working. You'll need to put the // at the end of each paragraph.
Besides from that, this was a really cool scip. The Sarkic flag was also a nice touch, which I can see being used a lot in the future (because vexillology is great).
I write stuff. Yipee.
My only real complaint is that it's too long. You have three collapsables, five tabs, and twenty footnotes! Consider splitting out the exploration log into its own page, at least.
This actually might work really well as three pages: the main SCP article, which teases but doesn't reveal much; a supplement about the villagers and their culture; and the exploration log and epilogue. The Manna document is either a fourth page or merged into the log.