SCP Foundation

Item #: SCP-2391

This should be: Item #: SCP-2391

(measurements 3x3x3 meters)

Is there any particular reason why the room's dimensions have to be this? If not, they don't have to be mentioned.

No guards are needed for SCP-2391 as it is incapable to do anything while covered in cellophane.

Then this should be classified as Safe, per Object Classes.

If its wrapping is broken it will be recovered and the one who touched it will be punished.

How will it be recovered? As for the latter half of this sentence, I feel as if this goes without saying. I'd like to think the people working on the continued containment of this thing would know better than to try and interact with it.

No testing is necessary for SCP-2391 as it will have no effect within the next 24 hours.

Would this be deserving a neutralized classification then? Why is its effect no longer going to exist?

ITS IS TO BE KEPT IN VIDEO SURVEILLANCE AT ALL TIMES.

Should just be "It's". That aside, the random capitalization for the sake of emphasis is not really necessary. If it is important enough to be document within the article, it shouldn't need extra emphasis.

it was reported to be lost and then found at a local trattoria 30 blocks away the next month.

This doesn't really tell me anything about where the object was obtained, as it is way too vague to make anything of it. This might be better suited for a recovery log rather than the description with the caveat that it is explained in greater detail, otherwise, consider omitting this entirely.

It grabbed the SCP Foundations attention when appeared in a military outpost in Portugal, [Unknown].

"SCP Foundations" should just be "the Foundation's". You also left out a word after "when". However, I thought this thing was discovered in Spain?

It was found and transported to Site 77

Should be Site-77

by Aircraft, Transport Vehicle, and by sea

There's no reason to capitalize aircraft and transport vehicle.

After testing it was found that it has the ability to teleport to different areas that carry a specific temperature and humidity at different times of the year.

My question with this is, how did the Foundation discover this thing if its anomalous properties were not uncovered until it was brought in for testing purposes? This should be explained more.

Though it can move to different sorroundings it has not attacked any personnel yet and has not acted as a sentient being in any way.

I'd reword this to say that the object is not aggressive and does not appear to be sentient, but I'd also include some evidence to back this up considering the thing randomly moves from one location to another. If it is capable of doing that, is it done instinctively or how is that accomplished if the object is not capable of thought?

Of note, the entire second paragraph should be the first paragraph in the description.

it has been seen as different colors supposedly but those are only rumors.

I'd reword this entirely or consider omitting it. If some personnel report seeing it change colors, that could be pertinent information if it is investigated or revisited, but otherwise I don't see the point of including this if it is going to remain an afterthought.

Its talons measure 4 inches

Use metric, not imperial.

its age is 100 years+ from what was found on the piece of wing.

So, has repair work been done to it for some reason? Or how did this happen?

Overall, this feels rather bare bones. Why the object seeks out different environments is never explained, though the Foundation discovered that through testing, and there's really nothing here in the means of a backstory. Who created this object, for example? From the last sentence it seems as if someone has done some sort of repair work to it, but who did that and why? Adding in elements like that, along with further explaining why this object functions the way that it does or what its purpose is, would be the direction I'd take this when moving forward. As is, this seems kind of similar to SCP-173 except for the fact it seeks out specific weather conditions and doesn't kill anyone, and while the fact that it doesn't harm people is refreshing, there's really nothing here that caught my interest or made me want to find out more about this thing.