SCP-XXXX " bay camera "
All feedback is appreciated, tell me everything wrong with it, is it salvageable?
Fixed the link for you. ~Zyn
SCP-XXXX " bay camera "
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Hi, im new to this site and i had this idea in mind for a long time, tell me if its good please
Please save it and don't give us the editing page.
I was almost to delete your draft mistakely.
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I just read and think the idea's interesting, but if it could not blow something behind a blockage, it is Not necessarily keter. Currently I even consider it a Safe object. Just we'll need more cell wall to contain it, maybe using some rather cheap material? For instance, place a series of wall-big mobile blockage made of plastic in front of it, then we can relatively effortlessly keep it in containment. And Foundation won't have to destroy( terminate) something they Should contain. cheers.
Thanks for the appreciation, I'm gonna go and edit it right now but just one thing first, how many resources would the foundation require to continuously replace the walls, this thing makes thing explode like, every 30 seconds in sight =/
Sorry, didn't read carefully enough… thanks still
I really do think the picture needs to be smaller EX: https://gyazo.com/cf06a6e16b87fc149a03af7c61f0755e
CaptainG7, the issue isn't so much with the image size so much as improper formatting. Using the standard image block (available in the "Formatting" tab of the How to Write an SCP Guide) automatically formats the image to display as 300 px wide.
Thanks Zyn, I'm going to do it right now
Not sure this is close to workable yet. It seems to be a rather simple object built up to be super dangerous and a pain in the ass to contain, and nothing more. The lack of context or any form of 'story' make it hard to see this as viable, especially because we have something that operates similarly (with reasonable restrictions) SCP-2501.
It may be in your best interest to drop into the Ideas and Brainstorming thread, write a quick summary of your SCP, and try to make sure you have a solid base to work from concept-wise.
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