Here's the link. It's the first tab. And here's the obligatory breakdown:
It was written for this year's Christmas Art Exchange, for Decibelle. She said that she'd like to see it on the site but would like to see it refined further before I do so. I know it doesn't fit with the tone of the canon it was meant for very well, but I'm not sure how to resolve that (or if I should). I also know it likely has typos and other easily corrected flaws.
So please, tell me what you think and how I can improve it.