I would like to know your personal opinion about my first SCP and what to improve, thanks.
So I haven't done much on the site in awhile, so take my advice with a grain of salt. But here goes.
With all that said, I feel there is an interesting concept here. It's clear the draft still needs work, but I encourage you to keep refining it. It would also be great if you dropped by the chat and got some feedback there.
I have added your changes and my sandbox page looks a lot better than it did before, thank you. I'll go ask the chat for suggestions after adding some extra changes.