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Had some time in the new year and decided to do some better crit
There are a lot more similar issues in your draft to the ones i have listed and you should take particular care with your sentence structure to ensure it reads with a clinical tone. I don't really understand the scp itself, at best it feels more like an anomalous object because its effects are never really explored and can be summarized as: pull this lever to make coins appear. It requires a lot more depth in order to work effectively and draw the reader in, perhaps explore more about where the coins come from or what its purpose is.