I would like some criticism upon my SCP
Summary:I wrote this, it is kinda short but like I have mentioned I would like a critique, or critiques upon it, I wish to see what I could possibly improve upon, thank you
Re: I would like some criticism upon my SCP
Petrograd 08 Jan 2017 00:21
There are a lot of little writing issues spread around here, like misused words, but I'd kinda prefer to put priorities on the big issue:
I recommend scrapping this one and going back to the drawing board. If at some point in the future you come up with a weirder idea or a story that fits with this monster, you can slot it back in, but it's not going to be a useful starting point.
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