N.B: The character string "█" actually means one of these: █.
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I like the concept, and the last two lines are a very nice touch, but I think you may have actually redacted a little too much in the description. The third paragraph especially (line 13 of the pastebin link) could benefit from expansion on the redacted sections. Always keep some stuff hidden, so that the reader's mind can fill in something more horrible, but as it is your redactions feel more like a case of writer's block. Still, I see some serious potential in this.