Hi! First time poster, trying to work out my first submission. Some feedback would be great.
Conceptually: Huh, portable hole the SCP. It's a potentially interesting concept, but the ending is kind of arbitrary and there's a lot of bloat.
First step is formatting help. There's a tab with templates here and they'll help make it much more readable.
The recovery log and its indestructibility are pretty much extraneous detail - they don't really add anything. Incident A is also suspect.
Cut those, and you'll have a much more manageable article. The interviews with the doctor are potentially interesting, but beg the question how she even got in there in the first place. The random death at the end is also a bit arbitrary, but I'm not sure of a better way to end it.
TL;DR Learn Wikidot formatting stuff, and cut anything that isn't important to the story you're trying to tell. After that, you'll have a good place to start.
Thanks! I'll make those edits and look into formatting. What I was going for with the ending was something along the lines of what happens when a bottomless pit turns out to not be bottomless at all. I'll rework it so that has more impact or change it up for a better ending.
Thanks again for the great feedback!