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Yay! Another contest entry!

I would like to thank minmin, WJS, Sirens, DrBleep, ARD, Silber, TyGently, Cyantreuse, and anyone else I am forgetting who helped me out with this entry. You guys rock.

This wasn't originally going to be what I was writing, but I was stuck and had this fresh idea that I think is better than what I was going for. Hope you guys enjoy it!

_{inb4 downvoted for memes}

e: Also thanks a lot to Deci for fixing my SCP-3000 numbering >.>

First of all: YES

Second of all: This isn't very scary. Some of the attempted squick in the final interview isn't very good, and I feel if you want to make this more creepy you should add it in one of the videos.

I didn't think this would be possible. Someone managed to make a We Are Number One SCP. I thought this was a joke article at first.

But this would've been better outside the 3000 contest. As I see it, it's an interesting SCP, but it just doesn't really fit the whole horror thing in my opinion. I will upvote this, but after the 3000 contest.

I'll just get the obvious comparison out of the way here first:

This doesn't do what SCP-1733 does successfully. There's real tension and throat-clogging fear in that, while this doesn't affect a certain group of people or recording, and instead all videos, it doesn't feel nearly as horrifying. Even that aside, this didn't entertain me much; it felt a bit like an imitation, and only the end of the interview made me interested.

Game Grumps

You actually did it roget i swear to Jesus

For reals now, I cant in good conscious upvote this, as the anomaly itself makes it like 100% less scary for me.

But this is pretty unnerving, so I won't down vote

Rethought my vote. This seems like a weirdly-put-together amalgamate of 1733, 871, and 2391 with a few sprinkles of bad dialogue.

Continuous, incomprehensible screaming.

So, it's no different from a regular video.

This would be fine outside the contest, personally I'm not feeling the horror which the contest calls for. Maybe if the interview was more gripping, with the obvious "twist" reduced a bit in length and the people in it having a more panicky response rather than being torn to pieces instantly.

+1 outside contest, novote for now

I would LOVE this outside the contest as a Gamers Against Weed scp.

I knew it was gonna be this. +1, because you did this right.