And idea me and my friend had for an SCP.
Okay, here it goes. Overall I kind of enjoyed the concept and the executions wasn't that bad, however there are a few problems.
Thank you for your feedback!
I have updated the SCP based on your critiques, and hope that it has improved!
Let me know if you find anything else that could use some work, I want to make sure this SCP is muy perfecto!
Alright, some minor changes (mostly spelling/grammar fixes, rewording stuff to make it sound better) as well as a few small additions to add a bit more information to its description have been made. I have also pretty much dismantled and rewritten the Special Containment Procedures to make it less wordy and more exact (many thanks to DataEncryptions critiques which mainly seemed to be based around the special containment procedures. Hopefully it sounds better and less awkward!). Anywho I'm hoping to wrap this SCP up (as I've been working on it for a couple weeks now) and looking for anymore critiques/issues with this SCP. If it looks good, I'm hoping to make it an official SCP (how exciting!).
Overall, I quite like this. I have a draft which I feel would create very interesting results if cross-tested with this (though cross testing is generally not recommended). I reckon this is almost ready for posting. Keep up the good work!
Shaa~laa~laa in the moooooon-liiight~~
Thank you for your review! Sorry for the late response, I haven't had much time to work on it over the past couple days, but I'm planning to work on it again soon.
Now, as for the whole "SCP-XXXX extracting heat from a persons body", you said it didn't feel right, which is actually the correct answer. I wanted the sense of "wait, repaired itself using heat? How is that possible?". I felt like it added a bit more mystery to it, like we thought we knew how this thing works but now we're not so sure. After reading through it again, though, I do agree that the experiment is kind of vague and causes more questions than it answers. I am going to try to expand on this section to make it more interesting and to clear up the confusion.
Again, thank you for your feedback! It was very helpful!