I'm lookin' for some critique on my new draft, A Million Years Young: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/genser
Any critique is good, I'd like to get this Scip off the ground.
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First off, the trope of making things decay at an accelerated rate has been fairly played out at this point. If this is to succeed, it's going to need a unique twist on that idea in order to separate it from the rest.
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