This is pretty good so far, but I'll have to second psul in that it's a little too silly in places - I had a good laugh at 'Age of Aquarius' myself'. Similarly, it's not the worst thing in the world, but adding in a Trump Tweet came across as patently ridiculous (when does it not?) and hurt the tension/lessened the gravity of the situation.
I'm not a fan of the suicide note, though I get the purpose it serves, it didn't feel like it added much - I'd consider a rewrite or excision. Speaking of Nori, I'd swap the two '(T-13) 11/24/19 ' events around - that way we see the replacement before the shift in tone, and not after (you're also missing a colon on one).
I'd love it for you to push back the event by about a week, and really narrow in on the last few days with Rory: the logs from 12/4 and 12/8 have a very down-to-earth, personal feel to them that I'd like to see a bit more of. This might help stave off that final statement just enough to give it a stronger punch.
On that note, I feel like the opening lines could actually reflect the final state of things - it seems too professional/clinical given the situation. Could this be toned down a bit? I wouldn't make it insanely obvious, but it could be decent foreshadowing.
Finally, the second and third collapsibles of the SCProcedures - at first glance I thought it was redundant. Could the list be dropped from the second - or better yet - could there be a shift in their priorities so there's a different order to help hammer in the speed, desperation and urgency of the escalation (or, drop one of the groups entirely [strike-through the O5s])?
Anyways, I'm excited for this one - good luck!