This is quite possibly my best SCP I have made. WARNING: This is leaning heavily towards Gamers Against Weed so please don't hate this because it just involves them.
This could be fun. But right now it feels a little too… murderous and malicious for Gamers Against Weed, since from my understanding they're a group of pranksters who aren't actually in this to end lives. Lines like "SCP-XXXX-03 are a rare instance where the subject becomes the late Steve Jobs." are funny but need additional development because my next question after reading that is "okay but how" and the article kind of skims on that. The first interview is terrible and has typos in it, like "Your" instead of "You're." The second one doesn't add much other than throwing Jobs' last words in for some reason? Honestly, the logs really drag this down and made me lose any good impressions the main description had made on me.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
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From what I gather I'm going to have to:
- Take out the logs as they provide nothing
- Add in connection to Gamers against weed (Mind giving some suggestions? Mind is drawing blank on this one)
Anything else to add to/take away from this?
- Removed Logs
- Added in the connection to GAW (Will remove if that too adds nothing to the "iVirus")
- Added more information to SCP-XXXX-03's description
Would like to have feedback on this and would love to improve this as much as possible. Also if it feels like its unfocused then please tell me how to make it focused.