http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/alexander-kuvizin-19. I would like to know if I have made any of mistakes in the updated article. Thank you a lot for your help. Your help is for sure considers the greatest :).
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Hi again, author.
Just a polite reminder to please keep to the 'one draft, one thread' rule. Rather than making a whole new board when you have an update, instead post on your original board. It helps keep all the feedback in one place so you - and others - can see what has been said, as well as helping against cluttering the boards up, which is a form of spam.
Here's a link to your original board, where it would be best to post on as of now, including the fact you've updated - http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2185359/alexander-kuvizin-19