SCP Foundation

[Any feedback specifically about Naval patrols and my math on the island expansion would be greatly appreciated. I know that my exploration logs may not be good either I'm looking for a lot of feedback on how to keep it all official sounding. I tried my best from what I remembered of other logs.]

• Don't use bold for emphasis. It looks unprofessional.
• "need to know bases only." > should be "basis".
• "nature The Foundation" > no need to capitalize "the". You don't write, "I'm going to The Walmart". Same applies to the Foundation.
• "sea faring craft" > seafaring is one word.
• "Two Destroyers, three patrol boats and one Aircraft Carrier" > destroyer and aircraft carrier don't need to be capitalized.
• All the parentheses and strikethroughs are really distracting. Is all that really necessary?
• "Due to the nature of SCP-XXXX increasing the perimeter was necessary to prevent" > in-universe, it's assumed that containment's in place for a good reason. You don't need fluff text like this padding the instructions. Just give the instructions.
• "Task Force Hansel" > is this meant to be an MTF? If so, the naming doesn't follow the usual pattern, which has a Greek letter, a number, and (usually) a nickname.
• "made entirely out of discarded gum" > "made entirely" is a little bit too casual, for me. Also, what kind of gum? Chewing gum? Tree gum? If wikipedia has a disambiguation page for it, it's probably worth specifying.
• "The most common examples are Ferns or high grass made from Winter Green gum, bodies of water like creeks or small ponds made of Spearmint" > this is… not really professional-sounding. It's more along the lines of a child describing a movie. No need to capitalize "ferns". Also, bodies of water are not flora.
• "take on a more fanciful nature." > again, not very clinical-sounding. "Fanciful" can be interpreted in a variety of ways, and it's not really objective enough to serve as a scientific wording in this context.
• "SCP-XXXX-1 is the designation given to any children that appear on the island." > At this point I started getting a little bored. We've got plenty of islands with random humanoids on it. Why does this need humans at all?
• "Since its discovery the island has grown at a constant rate of 2 km^2 or 0.8 million tons per year which is approximately equal to the amount of gum chewed and discarded each year around the world." > this essentially spoonfeeds the plotline to the reader, and it seems kind of too blunt for me.
• "the Foundation funded a Herculean effort to stop all sales of sugar chewing gum and encourage the public to chew sugar-free gum instead. Despite the Foundation's best efforts sugar chewing gum is still wildly popular around the world" > this sounds like a heck of a lot more work than makes sense. The Foundation doesn't even know if people chewing gum is actually causing the island to expand. Why bother wasting all those resources?

[- The island changes based on the common perceptions about it. If people think its like the board game then colored paths appear with landmarks from the game appear. If people think its a frightening monster waiting to eat you then it randomly begins to consume people that are on the island. This mean that rumors that get told about the SCP can change it.

- The island desires people. It wants people there, it lives to comfort/relax/spa kinda deal like your favorite dreams as a kid. SCP-XXXX will protect itself sure but only in self defense. The colors, the candy and the fantastical appearance is all there to draw people to it. Rumors spread the love and people begin to look for it on their own. The Foundation use it as a place to decompress agents and other high stress personnel while also monitoring its growth. Its a bit like the old fairy tales though, you stay too long and you never want to leave. After a while longer you can't. After that you are part of the island, helping others relax and encouraging them to stay longer and longer.

- SCP-XXXX is a gigantic fly trap. Once your on the island its only a matter of time before you fall/trip/break something that triggers the response to pull you under. (I don't like this idea at all)

-What about something like "Pleasure Island" like in Pinocchio? You get there and you hang out do what ever you want, eat whatever you want (there's only candy so :/) and so on. After a while is comes back to the flytrap island thing, people are too unhealthy or fat to leave and die on the island. If anyone tries to take a fat person from the island then SCP-XXXX pulls the fatty and their would be rescuers under.]