My #1 need for critique are the "Reactions During Testing" sections of the test logs. I feel like they aren't very clinical/professional sounding. Otherwise, just tell me what you think of the idea, tracks that you feel would benefit the article by being tested on, or just stupid mistakes I missed. Thanks! (First tab of the sandbox page)
Salvation by Hallucination
Summary:
A new SCP that I've been working on, trying to get one in the mainlist before series 4 begins
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