I'm rewriting my SCP and changing the exploration log into a report. The reason for this is because there cannot logically be a video feed, and relying on dialogue to describe everything is too bothersome. So, the events that took place will be recorded by a D-Class after the exploration, in a style similar to a journal entry.
My main problems are the tone (trying to convey an awestruck attitude, which gradually changes into dread) and incorporating characterisation (he will start off relatively calm, but will become demoralised and shaken throughout the exploration). Please give some advice.
Right now, my only reference is the SCP-835 document. Are there other after-action reports that I can read?
(Also, I feel that there should be a guide on writing logs in general. That would be helpful.)