It's not written poorly, but it never really grabbed my attention or had anything that really seemed interesting or unique for this article. Other amusement park articles have covered the ground here and I really feel not going more into the territory control of former amusement park creatures now trapped in this abandoned hellhole was a missed opportunity to give this SCP its own character. Perhaps if you expanded on that more, it could tie the mask effect into the main article better, since then you could say that they perhaps convert one another into different animal-like creatures, by repeatedly exposing each other to these masks, until they're all so mutated they can't even tell who should own what territory. I feel like there's still ground to be covered from this material. -1
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