I have been working on this one for a little over a week now. I would honestly love some critics. I can only do so much on my own with that kind of stuff, also spelling errors and such would be much helpful.
Hi author :)
Remember, there's no need to rush yourself. Writing SCP articles can take weeks or even months to get them perfect, so whilst it's advisable to get help in the first draft stages, it's also advisable not to rush yourself, and one of the ways you can do that is by not counting your own time that you've spent on doing something that is meant to be fun, not stressful.
So, on to the nitty-gritty.
Feedback finally complete, good luck!