SCP Foundation

Hi there! This is my first proper attempt at an SCP, based on the history of my local area. Let me know what you think (I'm interested in both whether the main concept appeals, and if so, whether the addenda are adding or detracting from it).

Thanks in advance! (Also, apologies for putting SCP-XXXX in the title of this, whoops.)

Safe/Euclid/Keter (indicate which class)

Please actually decide on an Object Class. It is an important part of the article. A reader might interpret this as you applying all three at once, which makes things confusing.

Okay, so we have the failure of pumping and the appearance of dead fen-skaters. The interweaving with history is nice, and the ending has impact. However, one weakness would be how the two events are interconnected. Currently, it feels vague or cluttered such that it is not clear. Clarity on that front would assist you greatly.