My first SCP! Please give me tips and critiques and on't mind being blunt.
Object Class: Euclid
Containment Procedures: As SCP- is a structure, mobile containment site Site-3432-AM has been constructed around the building. Any online tickets to to a movie theatre with the same address or location as SCP- are to be taken down. Entry is currently unpermitted.
Description: SCP- is a movie theatre located in ███████, Jiangsu Province, China, previously known as 红地毯皇家电影院 (Red Carpet Royal Theatre). The building is home to a dimensional anomaly, where any number of witness accounts and audiovisual recordings of events in the building can differ drastically. The amount of different accounts or recordings inside SCP- exponentially increases with the number of occupants. If only one camera or occupant is in the building, the events that occur will usually line up correctly with prior events and the predicted state of decay the theatre would be in. If only one occupant is inside, looking through the windows will correctly show what is occurring outside the building. It has indeed been determined that all reported events in SCP- do occur within parallel universes created on entry, but the chance of returning to our universe is approximately ██%. As such, entry is not permitted. Tickets directly for the theatre or addresses matching the theatre will appear online at a rate of about 5 tickets every 2 weeks. Individuals who purchase these tickets are not anomalously compelled to use the ticket, but the individual usually attempts to use their ticket so their money is not wasted. These tickets will almost always be for showings of movies that have not been released, cult classics, or [DATA EXPUNGED]. The anomaly became active on January 17, 1996, designated as SCP- -96A. SCP- -96A has been determined to be a shooting during a showing of Toy Story. Due to the conflicting reports and audiovisual recordings of SCP- -96A, the following transcription of events was generated by "Red Bridle", a program designed to aggregate a series of events with conflicting reports into a report of what occurred in the universe that we occupy. Researcher notes in parentheses.
REDBRIDLE REPORT 023
100% CERTAINTY, a MALE(1) enters LOBBY. [19:23]
98% CERTAINTY, MALE1 approaches COUNTER. [19:23]
100% CERTAINTY, MALE1 obtains BEVERAGE and UNKNOWN BOX (popcorn). [19:25]
79% CERTAINTY, VIEWPOINT (the security camera in the lobby) tracks MALE1 to HALLWAY. [19:25]
100% CERTAINTY, VIEWPOINT changes to VIEWPOINT2 (camera in the hall leading to the theatres). [19:26]
82% CERTAINTY, MALE1 enters DOOR6 (the theatre door) [19:26]
100% CERTAINTY, VIEWPOINT2 changes to VIEWPOINT 3 (camera in the theatre). [19:27]
54% CERTAINTY, TEXT on SCREEN1 reads [Disney Pixar] [19:27]
73% CERTAINTY, MALE1 drops BEVERAGE and UNKNOWN BOX and exits ROOM2 (the theatre) [19:28]
68% CERTAINTY, MALE1 returns to LOBBY and enters ROOM3 (the bathroom) [19:28]
84% CERTAINTY, MALE1 is not visible on VIEWPOINT1 for 35 SECONDS. [19:29]
78% CERTAINTY, MALE1 exits ROOM3 with UNKNOWN FIREARM (heckler & koch MP5) [19:30]
59% CERTAINTY, MALE1 fires upon MALE2 and FEMALE1 (man at counter and security guard) [19:30]
87% CERTAINTY, MALE1 enters ROOM4 (the projector room) [19:31]
90% CERTAINTY, VIEWPOINT1 changes to VIEWPOINT 4 (projector room camera) [19:31]
76% CERTAINTY, MALE1 removes object from PROJECTOR and replaces it with identical object. (changing the Toy Story tape out for another tape) [19:32]
66% CERTAINTY, SCREEN1 displays UNIDENTIFIED FACE - COLOURKEY - 0 (the screen flashed repeatedly with a set of images including Foundation training videos, signs of the buddhist faith, and more. A witness watching the security cameras live said that this was the first instance of differing events between cameras and viewers, but the security videos and witness accounts even before this event now differ dramatically) [19:33]
91% CERTAINTY, MALE1 enters THEATRE and fires on CROWD. [19:35]
59% CERTAINTY, POLICE arrives at THEATRE. [19:40]
84% CERTAINTY,, MALE1 exits THEATRE through DOOR7 (the emergency exit in the theatre.)
Due to the potential of declassification, no funerals were held and all attendees of the theatre were terminated.
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