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http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/lawfuless Despite the name of the page, I actually did put a deal of effort into this, so instead of being written off or dropping the idea entirely, I pulled it down so I could fix it. I'd really like some help where possible with any grammar, spelling, or punctuation issues I'm having. Any other things like 'do's or 'don't's would be also appreciated.

I like the description but feel when it gets to the addenda the article starts to become bogged down in frivolous details. A lot of that content could be consolidated into the main article. I'd also do the same consolidation of the interviews, as they're all pretty short and the content would be better in one long interview rather than piecemeal bits. The notes at the end are also rather pointless and could probably be cut.

I refer you to This Expungement Guide for advice on how you're expunging data.