SCP Foundation

I really hope something like this isn't already lurking on the mainlist: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/papatulus (first tab)

My main concern with this one (besides it being fine gramatically, tone-wise and all that for a mainlist) is that it doesn't come off as 'the foundation are idiots', that reasonably the method they used would be the best idea for a non-threatening entity like this. Also whether or not the expungements are good- a lot of them are just covering up dates or names, but if it works against the article (I always like them because they make an article look more like a SCP article than a clump of text) then do say.

I am not a professional at giving feedback but here we go.

Alright other than being hard to read at least on my laptop¹ this was a 'fun' read but I am not sure I'd upvote it just for that as to be honest the concept was a little bland as it felt like a X does Y SCP but it could be made really easily interesting by adding more clarification to the last thing mentioned on the Incident log.

Also maybe you could shorten this a little because in its current form it feels like a big block of text but that's my opinion as I have not really done feedback before so please wait for multiple people to review this because they can probably review this better than I could.²