Okay, there need to be spaces between the Item, Object Class, and Special Containment Procedures. Right now they're all bunched up. The interviews should also ideally have spaces. They currently look like this:
Dr. Akesson: I'm sorry, I still don't understand. It hates other languages?
SCP-XXXX-1: Yes. I'm one of only about ten thousand English speakers left. I think the last French speaker died a few years ago. French is big in this reality, right?
When they should look like this:
Dr. Akesson: I'm sorry, I still don't understand. It hates other languages?
SCP-XXXX-1: Yes. I'm one of only about ten thousand English speakers left. I think the last French speaker died a few years ago. French is big in this reality, right?
The last interview is a little bit on the nose and comes across as heavy-handed. You probably want a few more interviews between the first and the last one to lead up to actually interviewing the SCP.
The translation process was interesting, but otherwise it didn't tell me much that wasn't said already. I was like "okay, it's territorial and aggressive but it doesn't hate humans". Ideally you want to leave it with some kind of final reveal, but the last interview had no reveals, it was just rehashing what had already been said before.
