SCP Foundation

So this idea occurred to me, and I've made a tale out of it. It's in the first tab of my sandbox, currently titled "First Contact". It is about SCP-106. It is horror.

I want to really push myself on this (without over-writing it), so I would love lots of feedback, as general or as detailed as you wish. Thanks in advance.

I won't note particular concerns at this stage, other than to ask for any better titles people might have!

I just wanted to say that the ending completely blew me away and was the emotional gutpunch I didn't know I needed.

How about "In Sickness and In Health" (or something like that) as a title?