Unless if you meant for exact measurements, then the parentheses aren't needed.
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX is to be held in a steel, eight (8) by six (6) meter cube, with the walls being three (3) inches thick, is to be suspended over a large hole, which should span no more than fourty (40) feet wide, and have a depth of two thousand (2,000) feet. This hole should span the entire area; the entrance of the cube should be by a singular extendable walkway. A singular doorway of each chamber should be gas and magnetically sealed, and two seperate doors will be opened by sequence, to avoid possible containment breach.
Not sure if this is a typo, or if its meant to be like this. Also 'seperate' is spelled separate
and two seperate doors will be opened by sequence
Unless these details are really important to the SCP, then i wouldn't recommend putting them in here, but that is just my opinion.
SCP-XXXX is a Caucasian male in his mid-twenties. Hair and eyes are light brown, skin tone is fair with golden undertones. Subject measures at 1.88m in height and 170 lbs, average build.
The second 'Subject' in the sentence is redundant. I recommend rephrasing this sentence
Subject reports to feel pain inflicted on the subject.
Change the 'is' in this sentence to are.
At time of death, SCP-XXXX's original body rapidly decays, until the body, clothing, and any other item held by SCP-XXXX is reduced to dust.
I would revise this sentence to be, 'SCP-XXXX gains consciousness at the point when the brain is fully regrown.' Also conscious is spelled wrong.
SCP-XXXX seems to be concious at the point the brain is regrown
This sentence has some words that are redundant, i recommend revising. "difficult to contain at the late stages of its containment" change containment to confinement.
SCP-XXXX has proven difficult to contain at the late stages of its containment
Does it seem to show, or does it show? "it seems to show extreme amounts of aggression" does it seem that way, or is it shown to be always true?
SCP-XXXX seems to show extreme amounts of aggression to any individual who views it at a disliking
Should be part of the description.
SCP-XXXX was found in ██████, Texas, in █-██-2009, during a recent plane crash from an unknown origin. SCP-XXXX was revealed to be inside a heavily locked compartment, with multiple signs of faliure in attempts to ram open the doorway, which was made of compact steel. Medium-sized dents inside the doorway signified a heightened ability, but not enough to break the iron. A retrevial team secured SCP-XXXX shortly afterwards. Subject was identified as a pilot for the plane, by the name 'Quincy'. Investigations for any other previous relatives show no living relatives as of current state, the last living one being from the year [REDACTED].
10 meters is quite a big length for this in my opinion. Its seems like quite a big radius for something that a book does.
as well as anyone in a 10m radius of the object.
"large amounts of hate and anger to trigger emotionally" that sentence doesn't sound right. I consider revising to a sentence like this, 'The object triggers large amounts of hate and rage to any individual who comes into contact with it.'
The object causes large amounts of hate and anger to trigger emotionally inside any individual who comes into contact with it.
Delete 'of any kind'
SCP-XXXX-1 is written in an unknown language of any kind
How can it be written in an unknown language, and still be decoded?
SCP-XXXX-1 is currently being translated to a viable language for examination, although no success as of presently.
Typo here (pedestal)
atop a pedistal
