SCP Foundation

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First tab. Critique would be appreciated.

Ehh. I dunno about this. It really does seem overly derivative of Groundhog Day (it's even mentioned in the tab title) and I feel like while this is competently written clinical tone-wise, it just… doesn't particularly go anywhere and feels predictable. The mention of a mysterious guy mentioned at the end doesn't really save the piece since I feel like as a reader, I'm still left with questions about the anomaly and why it occurs from a "bigger picture" perspective.

I wonder if this might make a good tale? Then you'd actually have more of a plotline, and you can give the reader some Foundation personnel characters or town resident characters to root for. Give the reader a taste of what it's like to work with a weird place like this, such as Remember You does, or the perspective of how someone affected by the anomaly feels, like Greener Pastures. You can even keep some of the documentation if you want as inserts, the way Revised Entry does.