SCP Foundation

Your description is sometimes overlong and pretty severely lacking in clinical tone. Deep carnal tone, bouts of angst, shying away, washed out speech: these are much more poetic than technical. The length issue comes from a tendency to add in unnecessary adjectives and prepositional phrases.

As for the rest of it… It's a really basic initial idea. The physics of it is somewhat interesting, but it doesn't really expand it much. I have mixed feelings on the interview. Some aspects of it don't seem believable (their relationship/use of the boat doesn't seem realistic, e.g. Winning such different contests, I'm pretty sure you don't wait to name a boat, was he sleeping in a wetsuit?) I did enjoy the researchers banter and feel for the kid, even if the accident feels underthought.

The notes after the interview also seem underthought. I don't follow the doctor's logic and it isn't very scientific or psychiatric. Saying this is psychosomatic doesn't make sense, since he's affecting way more than his body. They seem to be making a huge leap by thinking the boat part will accomplish anything, and it doesn't seem to?

Overall, -1. You need a major check for clinical tone, and then some story elements need to be tightened up to be more realistic/believable. I think there might be something here, but the kids dramatic background and the researcher's notes and actions feel half-baked.

The subject is in his mid to late 20's and wears a black wet suit with waterproof fingerless gloves

All the time? Can he not change his clothes?

in a deep carnal tone of voice

What does this mean? Is there are more scientific way to say it?

a strange localized incident

Are containment procedures written for Foundation personnel? Then why specify the incident was "strange". If it weren't strange, it wouldn't be documented at all.

approximately 11 feet off the floor

Why use imperial measurements?

My dream had become a living nightmare.

Bad creepypasta cliche alert.