Here is my problem - http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-515 - Its gone through its first overhaul (as the original was blammed down to -9 during the night while I slept/day while I worked) and I'm asking for constructive critism, and thus far I'm suffering.
I've been told for the most part that the either idea is good, I just need to shave down the babble - or that people just outright don't like the idea.
I personally didn't like the first incarnation, but it was the best I had and no-one stopped to tell me how to fix it, this second incarnation is considerably better, and I actually kinda like it - but I'm stuggling as to how to fix this beast before it is buh-leeted, and while I've been asking in the chat but for the most part I've been told to delete the entry and start over because of its rating, without asking about the first incarnation that lead to its rating.
I'm no fool - I know for a fact my writing skills can be piss poor at times due to my dyspraxia/dyslexia/dyscalcula/dysgraphia and I know for a fact I miss things when I'm in too much of a rush to produce "OMFGTEHOSSUM" so all I'm asking is for someone to help me pull this thing apart, piece by blood piece if needed and help me fix this thing.
Anyone who can help, this really would be much appreciated - however all I can offer for the moment is my gratitude for all eternity and a digital cookie.
(/star wars reference)
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