trying for a more cause-effect style creepypasta. My first time trying, and it's…alright, I think.
Date: 26 May 2010 00:03
Number of posts: 7
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It doesn't hit me as much as the others. The others seem more real, like someone is telling the story. This just seems like a random forum post. It's nicely written and all, but it doesn't scare the living daylights out of me.
I admit, it was made in response to a /x/ thread. Not really my cup of tea, but i had to at least try it. I'll probably stick with story-driven, as I dig it more and am better at it. Still, I have a lot of love for this style of creepypasta, and like any fanboy, i have to try and imitate.
This is… okay.
…you know, you can just say "stick with what works"…