Alrighty, I recently uploaded an SCP that was downvoted, so I took some time to go through and try to fix what was wrong.
The two most common criticisms were that it was too much like SCP-802 and not creepy enough. I feel like I have added a good amount of creepiness, and started to take it in a direction different from 802. Nonetheless, I may not have gone far enough with either, or there may be other issues.
I would really appreciate any and all feedback you have. Be brutal (but constructive!). If you think the idea is unsalvageable, please, tell me so I know to stop working on it and move on. Thanks!
(it's the first one)