Date: 17 Aug 2010 18:35
Number of posts: 13
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Quite a good story, it threw me at the beggining because the name implies it will be an experiment log. You may want to change that.
I actually agree come to think of it. Are there any taboos in the naming convention? I'm very methodical in my naming of files and documents, and would like to name it something specific, concise, and descriptive. Would "SCP-919: Interrogation" be okay since it has the words "SCP-919" in it?
I assumed you'd done that on purpose, and rather liked the effect. But you can name it whatever you like, generally.
Incursion has sent me down a tunnel of awesomesauce today. +1
Made a few corrections grammatically. The first few paragraphs are past tense, and then it transitions to present tense once Temke walks in (and it works well that way, imo), but it kept going back and forth near the end, so I made it consistent with the rest of the tale. Feel free to revert if anything is deemed to be too much of a change.
Again, loved it!