Hopefully, the epilogue will clear things up for those who didn't get it.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 21:28
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Was the epilogue "you should run"?
Regardless, had I been drinking water I would have spit it all over my laptop at the last line. Something about a psycho women with weapons cracks me up. Well done.
Maybe I'm missing something but even after reading the above comment I just don't get anything from this it doesn't seem to make much sense to me. If as the above comment is right then why do her eyes turn from grey to yellow? The implied SCP? I dunno I just don't really like it I guess its just me.
So, did no one else think, at first, the words were "I love you"?
That was the idea.
At first I saw yellow eyes, and a dim part of my head went "Oh hell it's the Kumiho." I don't know why, since NOTHING else really lent itself to that. I'm actually glad for the prologue though, and that you didn't have an idea in your head that you tried to twist and mold to fit a currently existing SCP.