It all makes sense now… I rather like it.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 00:00
Number of posts: 44
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The second part comes to sound like a cereal ad. CRUNCH! IT'S NUTRITIOUS AND GOOD FOR YOU!
I couldn't help reading this in the voice of Ed from Ed Edd n' Eddy.
I really wanted to take this seriously… but 173 sounds too much like a retard here…
The irony of it sounding like "a retarded" is stunning.
But I have to agree with you on this point. I could not read the story without my mind jumping to the image of a psychotic Tarzan.
Huh? What irony? Did I wrote my previous post in a way that made me sound like a retard? I apologize, I'm not really seeing it…
Enma, in the US, a retard (noun) is retarded (adjective). (It's also a politically incorrect term, but that's a different discussion.)
Too drunk to rate effectively…rate tomorrow….
Alrighty, I am sober and have orange juice in me. Having re-read it, I cautiously like it. I almost dislike the idea that it gives 173 a motive, instead of it being just this mysterious killing machine. Still, it is well written and sensible. Upvoted.
I also find it amusing that weeping angel wrote a story about 173 that basically explains its ability to be identical in mechanics to that of a weeping angel. Amusing.
I still want to change that name to Gargus, like I have in chat, but as of yet, have found no means of doing this.
As for what you said, thank you.