SCP Foundation

• '20m by 20m' -> 20 m x 20 m
  • Why are specific measurements being used? Would a more vague term such as 'humanoid containment chamber' not suffice? Unless there's a very specific and important reason for it to be 20 meters exactly, don't use those measurements.
• 'basic humanoid life support' Have they not requested anything? Bearing in mind this is a sapient human being, it's odd that they would be content with just the very basic things they need to survive.
• 'SCP-XXXX-J was a Greek mathematician, often referred to as the "father of geometry"' Why would the Foundation not name him immediately if they know exactly who he is? This is yet another reason as to why this won't work as a -J article.
• 'mostly replacing the Object class " ████" with "Euclid".' I'm assuming that this is the main 'joke' of the article, but I'll tell you right now exactly why it doesn't work-

The build-up is slow and doesn't provide any anticipation towards the punchline (if you could even call it that) and the format is played completely straight-cut and dry, as if this was a standard SCP article.

The issue with that is that when those types of -J articles are done, there are often snippets of humor throughout in order to contrast and subvert the standard formula. Take the recent SCP-028-J, for example, in which the article seems genuine up until the last couple of lines. That's how you get a reaction out of your reader.

So, in summary: it's just not funny. If anything, it's confusing. I don't think this is going to work because the punchline is nowhere near strong enough.